Chapter One – Arrival
The sound of the floatplane’s engine faded into the distance, swallowed by the endless sky. The water of the lake rippled in its wake, then stilled, leaving behind a silence so vast it pressed on the ears.
“Mom,” Ethan whispered, clutching the straps of his pack. “It feels too quiet.”
His mother, Claire, crouched beside him on the wooden dock they had hammered together weeks ago on a scouting trip. She smoothed a hand over his dark hair, smiling even though her own stomach knotted.
“That’s the point, sweetheart,” she said. “No cars. No sirens. Just us.”
Six-year-old Lila ran past them, arms flapping like wings. “And ducks!” she squealed, pointing toward a cluster of mallards gliding across the water.
Behind them, Daniel—her father—was already unloading the crates from the plane’s last supply drop. Flour, sugar, canned goods, tools, and a few luxuries Claire had begged for: coffee, soap, chocolate. Everything else they would grow, catch, or gather.
The world they’d left behind—a cramped apartment in Seattle, horns blaring beneath their window, neighbors arguing through paper-thin walls—felt a thousand miles away. Out here, there were no neighbors. Just a forest thick with spruce and birch, a lake that stretched into the horizon, and the shadowed ridges of mountains hemming them in like sentries.
Ethan shifted uneasily, glancing at the tree line. The woods looked alive in the fading light, shadows stretching long and strange. He didn’t say what he thought—that some of those shadows moved against the wind.
Lila didn’t notice. She danced to the edge of the dock, humming a tuneless song.
“Careful, bug,” Daniel called, his voice carrying a weight Ethan recognized: the tightrope of worry and reassurance every parent walked.
They carried the crates up to the cabin. It wasn’t much—a single story, log walls, a chimney that leaned like it had one bad hip. Daniel had built it with his brother years ago, long before he’d met Claire, when escaping to the wild had been a dream instead of a necessity. The roof had been patched, the windows replaced, but it smelled of cedar and smoke. It felt… permanent.
That night, they ate trout Daniel had caught in the lake and roasted carrots from a small garden Claire had coaxed from the soil during the summer. Lila fell asleep at the table, cheek pressed against her bowl, while Ethan pretended to read by lantern light, though his eyes kept darting to the window.
Because out there, beyond the glow of the cabin, the dark pressed close.
It wasn’t just the animals—bears, wolves, the scream of a mountain lion echoing across the lake. Ethan had seen those on documentaries. He could prepare himself for claws and teeth.
But tonight, as the wind sighed through the trees, he heard something else.
A laugh. High, thin, and wrong.
It came from the woods. From the shadows. From something that knew he was listening.
Ethan froze, the book slipping from his fingers. His breath caught.
“Dad?” His voice cracked, too small in the large silence.
Daniel looked up from sharpening his knife. Claire followed his gaze to the window, her brow furrowing. “What is it?”
But when Ethan tried to point, the laugh was gone. Only the trees stood there, black and still against the silver smear of moonlight.
“Nothing,” he muttered, though his skin crawled with gooseflesh.
Upstairs, in the loft where she and Ethan shared a bed, Lila stirred in her sleep. Her small lips parted, and words spilled out, soft and slurred:
“They’re already here.”
Ethan turned to her, heart hammering, but she didn’t wake. She only smiled in dreams, as though listening to someone whispering back.
And outside, the lake rippled though no wind blew.
Chapter Two – Settling In
The days after the plane left were a blur of chores and silence.
Morning mist rolled off the lake like breath, thick and low, curling around the cabin porch until the trees were just shadows. Daniel rose before dawn, always moving quietly so as not to wake the kids. He chopped wood, checked the fishing lines, and watched for bears. Claire followed after sunrise, tending to the small patch of vegetables she’d planted near the waterline.
There was peace here—raw and unpredictable, but peace all the same.
Ethan, however, wasn’t so sure.
He kept glancing toward the forest, toward the place he’d heard that laugh. He’d told himself it was just the wind. Maybe a loon or fox. But the sound—how thin it was, how intentional—stuck with him.
The woods didn’t feel empty.
That afternoon, Claire took Lila out to the lake to wash clothes. The air smelled of pine and mud, the sun painting the surface of the water gold. Lila sat on a rock, splashing her feet and singing softly.
Claire smiled. “You love it here, don’t you, bug?”
Lila nodded, eyes fixed on the rippling water. “She likes it too.”
Claire paused, wringing out a shirt. “Who’s that?”
“The lady in the lake.” Lila said it so simply that Claire almost laughed.
“Oh, like the fairy tale?”
Lila shook her head. “No. Not her. This one’s sad. She cries all night.”
Claire’s smile faltered. “Honey, you’ve been hearing crying?”
Lila shrugged. “Only when she’s lonely.” She looked up with those soft blue eyes. “She said she used to have babies, but the water took them.”
A chill ran down Claire’s spine. The lake lapped at the shore, slow and steady, as though listening.
That evening, Daniel and Ethan built a crude fence around the garden to keep out deer. While Daniel hammered, Ethan scanned the darkening treeline.
“Dad,” he said quietly, “do you ever feel like someone’s watching us?”
Daniel chuckled without looking up. “Sure. Moose, maybe. Or a bear. You’ll get used to it.”
“No, I mean… someone.” Ethan’s voice lowered. “A person.”
Daniel straightened, squinting into the woods. “We’re fifty miles from the nearest town, kiddo. No one’s hiking all the way out here.”
But later, as the sun slipped behind the pines, they both heard the crack of a branch snapping somewhere just beyond the fence line.
Daniel froze, hammer still in hand. Ethan looked at him.
Another sound—a low, dragging step through leaves.
Then nothing. Just the quiet breathing of the forest.
That night, they locked the cabin doors. The wind rattled the shutters. Claire pretended not to be afraid, but her hands shook as she poured the last of the cocoa into two mugs for the kids.
When the lanterns went out, the dark swallowed everything.
Ethan lay awake listening to the soft sigh of the lake against the shore. Beside him, Lila whispered in her sleep again.
“Don’t be sad,” she murmured. “We’ll play tomorrow.”
Ethan turned toward her. “Lila?”
Her eyelids fluttered, but she didn’t wake. A faint smile curved her lips.
Downstairs, the boards creaked. Once. Then again. Slow. Deliberate.
Ethan held his breath. The family dog, Scout, lifted his head, ears twitching toward the stairs. Then he began to growl—low, guttural, his fur rising along his spine.
The sound came again: a soft step across the kitchen floor.
Scout lunged off the rug, barking violently. A crash followed, then silence so complete it rang in Ethan’s ears.
“Dad!” he shouted, bolting upright.
Daniel was already halfway down the stairs, flashlight in hand. The beam cut across the kitchen—nothing. Just overturned bowls and a half-open door swaying gently in the wind.
He checked the porch. The night was still.
But in the wet dirt just beyond the steps were footprints.
Bare. Small.
Leading away toward the lake.
Chapter Three – The Watchers
Morning came gray and uneasy.
The world outside the windows was still slick with dew, and mist clung to the lake like a curtain. Daniel stood on the porch, coffee steaming in his hand, staring at the ground where the footprints had been.
They were gone now—washed away by the night rain—but he couldn’t shake the image. Small. Human. Barefoot.
He’d told Claire it was probably Lila’s doing, that maybe she’d sleepwalked, but Claire had only looked at him for a long moment before saying softly,
“She doesn’t sleepwalk. She never has.”
And that was that.
The forest was alive that day with sound: the rustle of squirrels in the underbrush, the distant caw of ravens. Daniel went hunting while Claire cleaned and canned trout from the previous day’s catch.
Ethan was supposed to be helping her, but he couldn’t keep his eyes off the trees. He sat at the kitchen window, his reflection faint against the glass, trying to catch any movement beyond the trunks.
Something had changed in the woods since last night. He could feel it.
When he blinked, he almost thought he saw a figure standing near the edge of the clearing. Pale. Still. Watching.
He blinked again. It was gone.
Later that afternoon, Daniel came back through the door, face tight. He dropped his rifle onto the table.
“Claire,” he said. “You should see this.”
They followed him outside, the air thick with the smell of pine sap and damp earth. He led them fifty feet into the treeline, where the forest closed in tight around them.
There, carved into the bark of a birch tree, were three vertical slashes—clean, deep, deliberate.
Claire frowned. “A bear?”
Daniel shook his head. “Too even. Look.”
He pointed farther ahead. Another tree. Three marks again. Then another. And another.
Each set of slashes pointed inward, forming a rough circle around their property.
Claire’s skin prickled. “Maybe someone was out here before us?”
“Maybe.” Daniel didn’t sound convinced. He ran a hand through his hair, eyes narrowing at the pattern. “But I don’t like it.”
That night, the family stayed inside. Daniel kept his rifle by the door.
The kids sat near the hearth, playing a card game by lantern light. Lila hummed softly, distracted.
Ethan watched her. “What are you singing?”
She smiled. “It’s a song she taught me.”
“Who?”
“The lady in the lake.”
Claire dropped the spoon she was holding. It hit the floor with a clatter.
“Sweetheart,” she said carefully, kneeling beside her daughter. “You know that’s just pretend, right?”
Lila’s eyes were wide and sincere. “She’s not pretend. She’s real. She says the marks mean they’re watching.”
Daniel looked up sharply. “Who’s watching?”
“The ones who used to live here.”
The lantern flickered. For just a moment, the flame stretched sideways—like a wind had blown through the house, even though every window was shut.
Scout whined and backed into a corner.
Then, from outside, came the faint sound of something moving between the trees. Slow, rhythmic, circling the cabin.
Crunch.
Pause.
Crunch.
Daniel grabbed the flashlight and threw open the door. The beam cut through the dark. Nothing. Just mist.
But when he turned the light toward the nearest tree, something gleamed—fresh sap glistening on a new mark carved into the bark.
Three perfect slashes. Still wet.
And beside them, faint in the mud, were prints.
Small ones. Bare feet.
Inside, Lila had gone quiet. Her voice was a whisper when she spoke.
“They don’t like when you look at them, Daddy.”
Daniel froze in the doorway. “What do you mean?”
Lila’s gaze drifted toward the window, where fog was slowly thickening.
“They said they were here first.”
Chapter Four – Whispers Under the Floor
The wind came in from the lake that night, cold and heavy with rain. It rattled the tin roof like coins spilling from the sky. Every so often, thunder cracked, echoing across the water and rolling into the woods like an angry voice.
Claire woke first. Something—she wasn’t sure what—had pulled her from sleep. Daniel’s steady breathing filled the dark beside her. She lay still, listening. The storm outside was fierce, but it wasn’t the wind that woke her. It was something closer. Lower.
A whisper.
At first, she thought it came from the kids’ room. But no—this was softer, right beneath her, muffled by the floorboards. Words too faint to understand.
“Hello… hello… please…”
Claire’s heart pounded. She sat up, holding her breath. The voice came again, longer this time, like someone praying beneath the house.
“Cold… so cold… help…”
She swung her legs over the bed and reached for the lantern. The wick flared to life, painting the walls gold and shadow. Daniel stirred.
“Claire?” he mumbled.
“Shh,” she hissed. “Listen.”
He blinked blearily, frowning. “What am I—”
Then he heard it too.
For a long, terrible moment, they both just sat there, listening to the whispers float up from beneath the floor.
By morning, the storm had passed, but the unease lingered like smoke.
Daniel crawled under the cabin with a flashlight, pushing through cobwebs and damp earth. He found nothing—no sign of animals, no holes in the foundation. Just the smell of wet soil and the faint drip of water seeping through the boards.
When he climbed back out, his face was pale.
“Nothing down there,” he said, brushing dirt off his hands. “No tunnels, no critters. Nothing.”
Ethan stood on the porch, hugging himself. “But we all heard it.”
Daniel didn’t answer.
That afternoon, Claire tried to keep busy. She cleaned, chopped vegetables, tended to the fire. But everywhere she went, she heard faint sounds—soft knocks, the sigh of wood under invisible weight.
The cabin felt crowded, as though the air itself was watching her.
Lila sat at the table, drawing in crayon. Claire glanced over her shoulder—and froze.
The paper was filled with dark blue scribbles: a cabin surrounded by trees, and under it, pale faces pressed against the ground, mouths open as if screaming.
“Sweetheart,” she said carefully, “what’s that?”
Lila didn’t look up. “The people under the house.”
Claire’s throat went dry. “Who told you about them?”
“They did.” Lila drew another line—long, jagged, red. “They’re trying to come up.”
That night, Daniel set traps around the cabin and double-checked every lock.
Ethan couldn’t sleep. The whispering had returned, soft and distant at first, like a sigh through the floorboards. Then words began to take shape.
He slid out of bed, his bare feet cold on the wood, and crouched down.
“Ethan…”
He froze.
“It’s cold down here. Open the door…”
He glanced toward his sister. Lila was wide awake, staring at him.
“Don’t listen,” she whispered. “They’ll get in if you listen.”
Ethan swallowed hard. “What door?”
She pointed toward the rug in the corner. “That one.”
Confused, he pulled it back—and found a square outline cut into the floor. A trapdoor he’d never noticed before. The handle was old and rusted, half-hidden under years of dust.
The whispering grew louder, like dozens of voices speaking at once.
Lila backed away. “Don’t, Ethan.”
His hand hovered over the latch. The wood beneath him vibrated faintly, as if something below was pressing upward.
Suddenly, Daniel’s voice boomed down the hall: “What are you two doing up?”
The whispering stopped instantly.
Ethan jumped, pulling the rug back over the trapdoor. “Nothing,” he said too quickly. “We couldn’t sleep.”
Daniel sighed. “Back to bed. It’s late.”
As he turned off the hall light, the cabin sank into darkness again.
From beneath the floor, faint as breath, came a single word.
“Soon.”
Chapter Five – The First Attack
The next morning dawned with a false calm.
Sunlight streaked through the mist, and the lake glowed like glass. Birds returned to the branches, shaking rain from their wings. To anyone else, it might’ve looked like a beautiful day.
But inside the cabin, the silence had a weight to it.
No one spoke about the whispers. Not Daniel, not Claire, not the kids. But they moved differently—quietly, carefully—as if the walls might be listening.
Daniel busied himself with work. He needed to do something. Fix the dock. Check the snares. Replace the fence posts near the tree line. Action meant control.
He didn’t believe in ghosts. He told himself that more than once. But every time he looked toward the lake, something deep inside whispered that this wasn’t about wildlife or weather. This was something older. Something that had claimed this place first.
By late afternoon, he took Scout with him to check the traps.
The dog bounded ahead, tail wagging, nose to the ground. The woods smelled rich after the rain—wet pine, moss, and the faint rot of old leaves.
Daniel followed the narrow trail for nearly half a mile. Two of the snares were empty. One had caught a rabbit, though the animal’s body was twisted, its neck broken clean—but oddly arranged, as if placed there deliberately.
He frowned. Something about the position of the paws… it looked like a pattern.
He shook it off. “Just a fluke,” he muttered, resetting the snare.
Scout barked suddenly—a sharp, startled sound. Then a low growl.
“Hey!” Daniel called. “What is it, boy?”
The growl deepened into a snarl. Daniel jogged toward the noise, pushing through ferns—then stopped dead.
The forest ahead had gone utterly silent.
No birds. No wind. Nothing.
“Scout?” he said again, quieter this time.
A soft whimper answered him from somewhere ahead, followed by the sound of something dragging through leaves.
Daniel raised his rifle, heart pounding. “Scout!”
He found him twenty yards away. The dog lay half in shadow, his fur wet and matted with dirt. His chest moved once—then stopped.
Daniel dropped to his knees beside him. The wound was strange—not torn, not bitten. More like sliced, clean and deep across the side, as if by something sharp.
He scanned the trees, every instinct screaming. “Come on,” he whispered, voice shaking. “Come on, buddy…”
Then, from behind him, came a whisper.
Low. Human.
“He was only the beginning.”
Daniel spun around, rifle raised—but the forest was empty.
When he carried Scout’s body back to the cabin, the kids were already on the porch. Claire’s face went white.
“Oh, God,” she whispered. “Daniel…”
Ethan backed up a step. Lila clutched her mother’s leg, eyes wide.
“What happened?” Claire asked.
Daniel could barely form the words. “Something got him.”
“What do you mean something?”
“I don’t know.” His voice cracked. “I just—he was—” He stopped himself, lowering the body gently to the ground.
Claire dropped beside him, sobbing.
Lila stared at the woods. Her little voice came out flat, hollow.
“She told me they were hungry.”
Everyone froze.
Claire turned to her. “Who told you that, Lila?”
“The lady in the lake.”
Ethan felt the air shift around them, colder now. “What did she mean, hungry?”
Lila’s gaze drifted toward the treeline. “They said the dog was loud. They don’t like loud things.”
That night, no one slept.
Daniel buried Scout near the dock, marking the grave with stones. Claire lit candles inside, whispering prayers she hadn’t said since her mother’s funeral.
Ethan sat at the window, eyes fixed on the lake. Moonlight shimmered across the surface, and for a heartbeat, he thought he saw movement—something pale, rising just beneath the water.
It wasn’t a fish. It was a face.
He stumbled back from the glass, pulse hammering. “Mom!”
Claire rushed in, Daniel behind her.
“What is it?”
He pointed. “In the lake—I saw—”
But when they looked, the water was smooth again, the moon’s reflection undisturbed.
Daniel muttered something under his breath and shut the curtain. “We’re all just tired. That’s all.”
But as they walked back toward the living room, the floor creaked under Daniel’s feet—one sharp, hollow sound—followed by another, just a step behind him.
Like someone walking in rhythm with his own footsteps.
When the lanterns went out, the whispering returned. This time, it came from everywhere—the floor, the walls, even the chimney.
Lila started crying softly into her pillow.
And from outside, by the fresh mound of earth near the dock, came the sound of something scratching.
Slow. Persistent.
As if trying to dig its way back up.
Chapter Six – The Lake Lady
The morning came thin and gray, the kind of light that felt more like an afterthought than a sunrise.
The lake was flat as glass again, fog curling off its surface in pale ribbons. Claire stood at the window, arms crossed tight over her chest. The earth near the dock—where Scout was buried—was disturbed.
She didn’t say anything to Daniel. She didn’t have to. He’d seen it too.
They both agreed, silently, to pretend they hadn’t.
Breakfast was quiet. Lila picked at her oatmeal, her spoon tapping rhythmically against the bowl. Ethan barely ate at all. Daniel drank his coffee black and bitter, staring at nothing.
Finally, Claire broke the silence.
“We should radio for another supply drop. Maybe early.”
Daniel didn’t look up. “Weather’s bad. Plane won’t come for days.”
“So we wait here? With this going on?”
“What else can we do?” His voice was sharper than he meant it to be. “We’re not running from some noise in the walls.”
Claire’s expression hardened. “This isn’t about noise anymore, Daniel.”
Before he could respond, a sound interrupted them—soft and musical.
Humming.
They turned. Lila sat perfectly still in her chair, eyes unfocused, a smile playing faintly on her lips. The tune was old, unfamiliar. It rose and fell in strange, uneven waves, like a lullaby sung backward.
“Sweetheart,” Claire said, moving closer. “Where did you learn that?”
Lila blinked, as if waking from a dream. “She taught me. The lady in the lake.”
Claire knelt beside her. “Lila… we talked about that. There’s no lady in the lake.”
“Yes, there is.” Her little voice was calm, absolute. “She says she used to have a family, too. Before they drowned.”
Claire froze. “Drowned?”
Lila nodded. “They lived here, before us. The water took them away. But she stayed.”
Daniel stood slowly. “What does she want, Lila?”
“She said… she wants to come home.”
By late afternoon, the fog thickened until the far side of the lake vanished entirely. The air was heavy, wet.
Daniel tried to distract himself with chores—splitting firewood, fixing the fence—but his axe kept glancing off the wood, his hands unsteady. Every time he stopped to breathe, he swore he heard whispers under the drone of insects.
Daniel… Daniel…
He turned in circles, scanning the trees. The forest seemed to breathe with him—inhale, exhale—each movement matched by an echo in the shadows.
He set the axe down. Enough.
When he went back inside, Lila was gone.
“Ethan!” Claire’s voice was sharp, panicked. “Where’s your sister?”
“She was coloring,” he said. “She was right there a minute ago!”
They tore through the cabin, checking every room, every corner. The back door was cracked open, a gust of wind flickering the lanterns.
Claire’s breath caught. “The lake.”
They sprinted out into the fog. The air was so thick it felt solid, muffling their shouts.
“Lila!” Daniel called. “Lila!”
Then they saw her.
She was standing knee-deep in the water, her nightgown trailing like ghost-white silk behind her. Her head was tilted slightly to the side, as if listening.
“Sweetheart!” Claire screamed. “Come here!”
Lila didn’t move.
“She’s calling me,” she said softly. “She says it’s okay now. She’ll keep me safe.”
Daniel waded in, boots sinking into the mud. “Lila, don’t you move!”
The water around her began to ripple, even though the air was still. Bubbles rose to the surface, slow and steady, as if something deep below was breathing.
Then a pale hand broke the surface—thin, long-fingered, dripping black water. It reached toward Lila’s ankle.
Daniel lunged, grabbing his daughter around the waist and yanking her back just as the hand clamped down. The grip was ice-cold, impossibly strong.
“Let go!” he roared, pulling with everything he had. Claire ran to help, both of them fighting against something unseen beneath the surface.
Finally, with a sound like suction breaking, the hand released. Daniel stumbled backward, dragging Lila into his arms.
They fell onto the shore, gasping.
The lake went still again.
For a moment, nothing moved—no ripples, no wind. Then, slowly, a shape rose from the water.
It was a woman. Or what had once been one. Her skin was colorless, her hair floating around her like strands of drowned seaweed. Her eyes were wide and black, reflecting nothing.
She smiled—cracked lips stretching too far—and whispered in a voice that carried across the water:
“She belongs with me.”
Claire screamed, clutching Lila tighter.
The figure began to sink back beneath the surface, her smile never fading.
When the water finally closed over her, the ripples spread all the way to shore, lapping at their feet like a heartbeat.
That night, Claire refused to let Lila out of her sight. She and Daniel argued in hushed tones by the fire.
“We have to leave,” she whispered. “We can’t stay another day here.”
“We can’t go anywhere until the plane comes. You know that.”
“She almost drowned, Daniel!”
He ran a hand over his face. “I know. I know. But we’re stuck until we get help.”
From the corner of the room, Ethan spoke quietly.
“What if she doesn’t let us go?”
They turned to look at him.
He stared at the window, where droplets of lake water streaked down the glass in perfect vertical lines—three of them, evenly spaced.
Just like the marks on the trees.
Chapter Seven – The Thing in the Woods
The air turned colder that night, as if something in the forest had drawn the heat away. Frost crept over the cabin windows even though it was early autumn. The family gathered around the woodstove, silent except for the soft pop of burning logs.
Daniel sat with the shotgun across his knees, eyes fixed on the window. He’d set traps earlier that day — a crude perimeter of wire and bait cans that would rattle if disturbed. The motion cameras, bought from a hunter who used to fly supplies out here, blinked red in the corners of the room.
Claire tried to read, but every sound made her glance up. “Do you think it’ll come back?” she whispered.
Daniel didn’t look away from the window. “If it does, we’ll be ready this time.”
Ethan sat on the floor, fiddling with one of the trail cameras. He hadn’t said much since the night the dog died. His eyes were rimmed red from lack of sleep. “What if it already is?” he muttered.
Claire frowned. “What do you mean?”
Ethan lifted the small device and pointed to the screen. “I set one near the lake two nights ago. I didn’t tell anyone because I wanted to see for myself. I looked through it this morning.”
He clicked through grainy images until he stopped on one. Claire leaned closer, her breath catching.
In the photo, taken just before dawn, something tall stood between the trees at the edge of the lake. Its limbs were long, impossibly thin, its body a pale blur in the mist. But its face—or what should’ve been one—was only a smear of light, as if the camera couldn’t decide what it was seeing.
Daniel’s hand tightened on the gun. “That could be a glare,” he said too quickly.
Ethan shook his head. “It moved between frames. You can see it get closer.”
He flipped to the next picture. The figure was nearer, half-shrouded by trees, its head tilted as though it were staring straight at the camera.
Then another. Closer still. Until the final shot, where the lens was filled entirely with fog and something that looked disturbingly like a hand pressed against the glass.
The image ended there.
No one spoke for a long time.
Finally, Lila’s small voice broke the silence. “She said not to take her picture.”
Claire froze. “Lila, who said that?”
“The Lake Lady.” Lila hugged her knees, her voice dreamlike. “She said if we look at her too long, she’ll start looking back.”
Daniel stood abruptly, setting the gun aside. “Enough. We’re not doing this again.”
But that night, none of them could sleep.
The forest was restless — snapping branches, rustling leaves. Then came a noise none of them could explain: a low, humming tone that vibrated through the walls like a sigh made of thunder. The motion cameras began to click on their own, one after another.
Daniel grabbed the flashlight and crept outside. The beam swung across the clearing, slicing through the mist. Nothing moved. But the woods felt alive — breathing, waiting.
Behind him, Claire watched from the doorway, whispering his name.
He turned slowly, shining the light back toward the cabin.
That’s when he saw it.
A shadow stood behind Claire inside the doorway — tall, angular, its outline shimmering as if reflected on water. Before he could shout, the light flickered, and the thing melted into the dark.
Claire screamed. Daniel ran for the door, nearly tripping over the threshold. Ethan rushed from the bedroom, flashlight in hand, and caught sight of a long scratch seared into the wall — fresh, steaming faintly in the cold air.
Lila stood in the corner, her eyes wide but unafraid. “She’s not trying to hurt us,” she whispered. “She just wants to come inside.”
Ethan looked at her, his voice shaking. “Then she already has.”
Outside, the wind rose again, carrying with it a faint voice — a woman’s, singing something soft and distant, like a lullaby echoing from under the lake.
The traps did not rattle that night.
But every camera recorded the same final image before shutting off:
a pale shape crawling toward the house on all fours.
Chapter Eight – The Storm
The wind came first — a low moan rolling across the lake, pushing waves against the dock until the ropes snapped loose. Then the rain began, pounding against the roof in a steady roar that drowned every other sound.
Inside, the cabin was dark. The generator had sputtered out hours ago, and every attempt Daniel made to fix it ended in failure. The tools kept slipping from his hands; the metal was slick, and something about the air felt charged — as if the storm itself were alive and watching.
Claire lit the last of the candles. Their glow trembled, reflecting off the window where water streamed down like fingers.
“We need to get through tonight,” she said softly. “Tomorrow, we can radio the pilot.”
Daniel didn’t answer. He sat by the door with the shotgun across his lap, the same position he’d taken every night for a week. But tonight felt worse. The woods were too quiet between gusts — no frogs, no wind through the trees, no animal sounds at all.
Ethan had been staring at the motion camera feed on his laptop, though the storm made the connection flicker. “It’s glitching again,” he murmured. “But I keep seeing… shapes. Like people, just standing there.”
Claire leaned over his shoulder. The screen was grainy, static cutting across every few seconds. But for a brief instant, she saw what he meant — figures surrounding the house, standing shoulder to shoulder at the edge of the trees. Not moving. Not blinking.
“Maybe the trees are shifting,” Daniel said. “It’s dark, the storm—”
A heavy bang interrupted him. Something hit the side of the cabin, hard enough to rattle the windows. Lila woke screaming, clutching her blanket.
“They’re angry,” she sobbed. “She says they don’t like the light.”
Claire grabbed her daughter, pulling her close. “Who, Lila? Who’s angry?”
“The ones under the water,” she whispered. “The drowned ones. She says they want their house back.”
The power surged. The laptop screen flared white before cutting to black. Then, every candle in the room went out at once.
The darkness that followed wasn’t normal — it was thick, heavy, as if it had substance. Ethan turned on his flashlight, but the beam died halfway across the room, swallowed by the shadows.
From outside came the sound of footsteps — slow, deliberate, splashing in the mud. One pair became two. Then more. The porch creaked.
Daniel aimed the shotgun toward the door. “Stay behind me.”
Something brushed against the window — a handprint appeared in the condensation, dragging downward. Another followed beside it, smaller, child-sized. Then more, until the entire window was covered in prints.
“Back up,” Daniel hissed.
But before he could move, the front door groaned. The lock twisted on its own, clicking open. The door swung inward with the force of the wind, and cold air rushed inside.
Lightning flashed.
For an instant, the family saw them — shapes in the doorway, dripping with lake water, their skin gray and torn, their eyes glowing faintly blue. Dozens of them.
Daniel fired. The sound echoed across the lake like thunder, but when the light faded, nothing stood in the doorway. Just the storm.
Claire grabbed Lila and Ethan. “Basement, now!”
They stumbled toward the trapdoor in the floor. Daniel covered them, reloading with shaking hands. But before he could follow, the air pressure in the room changed — the temperature dropped so fast his breath fogged.
Then, a voice. Soft, almost kind.
“Daniel…”
It was Claire’s voice. But she was already below, calling up to him.
He turned toward the sound. In the flicker of lightning, he saw her — or something wearing her shape — standing in the corner. Her eyes were wrong. Too dark. Too deep.
“Come into the water,” she whispered. “We’ve been waiting for you.”
The wind slammed the door shut behind him.
Claire screamed from below as the trapdoor slammed, locking her and the children in the dark. Rain hammered the roof. The sound of Daniel’s gun firing once, then twice, echoed through the cabin.
Then silence.
Only the storm remained — and the faint sound of footsteps retreating toward the lake.
Chapter Nine – The Haunting Unfolds
Morning came, but the light didn’t. The storm clouds still clung to the mountains, pressing low and gray over the lake. The cabin was soaked, the floors slick from the rain that had seeped in through cracks and broken glass. The air smelled of wet wood and something else—something metallic and wrong.
Claire pushed open the trapdoor slowly, her hands trembling. “Daniel?” Her voice cracked. “Daniel, it’s morning…”
No answer.
Ethan climbed out first, gripping a hatchet in one hand and the flashlight in the other. The beam swept across the main room. The table was overturned, one of the windows shattered. The shotgun lay on the floor, empty. Muddy footprints—bare, wide, too many toes—tracked across the floorboards toward the open doorway.
But no Daniel.
Claire’s throat tightened. “We have to find him.”
Ethan looked toward the lake. The dock was gone, ripped apart by the storm. And just beyond the shallows, a figure floated facedown, tangled in reeds.
Claire froze. “No…”
She ran for the shore before Ethan could stop her, wading into the freezing water. But when she reached the body and turned it over, her heart stopped.
It wasn’t Daniel. It wasn’t anyone she knew.
The face was bloated, waterlogged, the eyes pale as glass. And yet—beneath the ruin—Claire could make out something impossible. The woman’s face was almost identical to her own.
She screamed, stumbling back toward the shore.
Ethan grabbed her arm, dragging her away from the water. “Mom, we have to go inside!”
But Claire couldn’t stop staring. “She looked like me, Ethan. She—she had my face.”
Lila stood on the porch, pale and shaking. “She showed me her picture,” the little girl whispered. “The Lake Lady said she used to live here. Before they drowned her.”
Claire knelt beside her daughter. “Who drowned her?”
Lila’s voice was small. “The people from the town. She said they built the dam, and it flooded everything. All their houses, their church, their families. They couldn’t leave. So they stayed down there.”
Ethan’s eyes widened. “The old maps.”
“What maps?” Claire asked.
He hurried inside and dug through a drawer, pulling out the laminated flight maps Daniel kept from the supply pilot. One of them showed the valley before the lake existed—decades ago. There, in faded ink, a name stretched across what was now open water.
Mirefield Village.
“It was a town,” Ethan said. “They flooded it to make the lake. Mom, all of this—it’s under us.”
Claire felt the room tilt. “And they’re still there.”
Thunder rumbled in the distance. Lila turned toward the window. “They want us to come home.”
Before anyone could speak, the floorboards creaked. The sound came from beneath them—soft, wet, like something dragging across the underside of the cabin. Then a thud. Another. Until it was pounding, shaking the floor so hard the dishes rattled off the shelves.
“Downstairs!” Claire shouted.
They fled to the basement again, huddling near the far wall. But the pounding didn’t stop. The boards began to bow inward, the nails groaning as if the house itself were being pried apart.
Ethan pointed his flashlight toward the sound. The beam caught movement—thin, pale fingers pushing through the gaps in the wood. They were reaching for them.
Lila screamed, covering her ears. “She’s angry! You’re not supposed to stay here!”
“Why?” Claire grabbed her shoulders. “Why not?”
“She says this isn’t our land. It’s theirs. The lake took everything from them, and now it wants to take us back.”
The walls shuddered. Water began leaking through the cracks, running down like tears. The flashlight flickered once, twice—then died.
In the pitch black, Claire heard Ethan whisper, “Mom… I think they’re inside the walls.”
Something brushed against her hair. A hand—cold and slick. She lashed out blindly, hitting only air. Then came the whisper: a dozen voices overlapping, echoing from everywhere at once.
“Stay. Stay with us. The water is waiting.”
The floor gave a sudden, cracking groan. Water burst through the seams, rushing in fast. Within seconds it was ankle-deep, then knee-deep. The basement filled with the sound of screaming—hers, Ethan’s, Lila’s—and beneath it all, faint laughter.
Claire grabbed her children, dragging them up the steps. The trapdoor burst open under the pressure, and they climbed through just as the basement filled completely.
Outside, the lake had risen over the banks. The water was creeping up the porch steps, swirling black with mud and debris.
And in that water, Claire saw faces. Dozens. Men, women, children—all staring back.
Then she saw Daniel.
He was standing waist-deep in the shallows, his clothes dripping, eyes blank and gray. He lifted his hand slowly and pointed toward the water.
“Come back inside,” he said. His voice was wrong—flat, hollow, echoing from everywhere and nowhere. “It’s safer in the lake.”
Claire screamed his name, but he only smiled.
Then, one by one, the figures in the water began to move toward the shore.
The drowned village was waking.
Chapter Ten – The Last Flight
The storm broke at dawn. The clouds tore apart in streaks of gray, revealing a pale, cold sun that shimmered weakly over the lake. The water was unnaturally still — glass-smooth, as if the wind had died in its throat. The air hung heavy with rot and smoke, the scent of something burnt buried deep in the mist.
The cabin leaned slightly to one side now, its porch half-submerged in the rising water. Inside, everything was silent except for the slow, steady dripping of lake water through the ceiling.
Claire sat against the far wall, soaked and shaking, her arms wrapped around Ethan and Lila. None of them had slept. Every creak of the house sounded like footsteps. Every ripple in the water outside made her heart jump.
She kept her eyes fixed on the horizon — waiting, praying — for the sound of an engine.
And then, faintly, she heard it.
A low hum, growing louder. The familiar buzz of propellers cutting through the air.
“The plane,” Ethan breathed.
Claire staggered to her feet, pushing open the warped door. Across the lake, breaking through the fog, came the silver shape of the floatplane. Its pontoons skimmed the surface, sending ripples across the still water.
“They came back for us,” she whispered, tears stinging her eyes.
The plane circled once before slowing, preparing to land. The pilot, a burly man named Travis who’d brought them supplies every two weeks, waved through the windshield. Claire grabbed the flare gun from the table, fired a bright red burst into the air.
Ethan and Lila stood beside her, watching the light fade into the mist.
But something was wrong.
The water below the plane began to move — rippling outward, faster, harder, as though something massive was rising beneath it.
The floatplane dipped. Travis shouted, his voice faint across the distance. The ripples turned into whirlpools. Dark shapes moved beneath the surface, circling.
Claire’s stomach dropped. “No… no, not now—”
One of the pontoons jerked downward. The plane tilted violently to the side. Travis tried to pull up, but another surge of water struck from beneath, flipping the aircraft like a toy. The sound of metal twisting filled the air.
Ethan screamed. “Mom! They’re pulling it down!”
The plane vanished beneath the surface, swallowed whole. The water stilled again. No bubbles. No wreckage.
Nothing.
Lila began to cry. “She said nobody leaves. Not until they listen.”
Claire turned on her, desperate. “Lila, listen to me — you have to stop listening to her, do you understand? She’s not your friend.”
Lila shook her head. “She’s not mean. She’s lonely.”
From the lake, a figure began to rise.
It was Daniel. Or what was left of him. His skin was pale and stretched, his hair dripping, his eyes two empty hollows filled with lakewater. Around him, other figures followed — men and women in tattered, rotted clothes, their movements smooth and slow as if the water still held them.
Claire stumbled back, pulling her children inside and slamming the door.
The windows began to fog. Pale hands pressed against the glass. The voices came again, whispering through the walls:
“Stay with us. The water remembers.”
The floorboards groaned. Water began seeping in again, rising fast around their feet. Ethan tried to push furniture against the door, but it only slowed the inevitable. The water kept climbing, inch by inch.
Claire pulled her children onto the table, clutching them tight. “We’ll get out when it stops raining. We’ll find another way.”
But outside, the sun still shone. There was no rain now. Just the endless, silent rising of the lake.
The front door burst inward. Water surged in, knocking the table off balance. Claire caught Lila’s arm, but the current was too strong. The little girl slipped from her grasp, screaming as the wave pulled her toward the open doorway.
“Lila!”
Ethan dove after her, grabbing his sister and clinging to a beam. The water rose to their chests. Then their necks. Claire gasped for breath, reaching for them through the freezing flood.
Through the open doorway, Daniel stood knee-deep in the lake, holding out his hand. “It’s all right,” he said gently. “It’s not so cold once you stop fighting.”
Claire stared at him, her lips trembling. “You’re not him.”
The figure smiled — a soft, almost tender smile. “Maybe not. But he’s still down here. Waiting for you.”
The roof groaned. The cabin shuddered once, twice — then gave way entirely. The world tilted, water rushing in from every side. Claire screamed as the walls split apart, dragging them into the black.
She clung to Ethan’s hand as long as she could. She thought she saw light — maybe from above, maybe from below — before everything went silent.
Days later, the lake was calm again.
A different floatplane landed, carrying two search officers sent to check on the family who hadn’t answered radio calls. They found the cabin half-submerged, its roof caved in.
No sign of the family. No sign of Travis or his plane.
One of the officers, a young woman, noticed something odd near the dock — a line of footprints in the mud. Tiny ones, leading down the slope into the water.
She crouched to get a better look. The prints ended abruptly at the lake’s edge.
And from somewhere beneath the glassy surface, just faintly, she thought she heard children laughing.
Epilogue – The Lake Sleeps
The lake returned to its quiet, mirror-like state. The fog no longer swirled in eerie ribbons across the water. Birds cautiously returned to the trees. The forest seemed almost peaceful.
And yet, anyone who approached the shore could feel it — a weight, a heaviness that made the air taste of iron and salt. Something lingered just beneath the surface. Something watching.
Years passed. Hikers occasionally wandered too close, drawn by the beauty of the isolated lake. Some spoke of strange sounds at night: faint singing, like a lullaby carried across the water. Others claimed to see pale faces staring up through the glassy surface, then disappearing when approached.
The old cabin was gone entirely, claimed by rot and water. Driftwood and debris marked the shoreline where it had once stood. No one knew what had become of the family, the dog, or the pilot who had tried to rescue them.
Occasionally, small footprints appeared in the mud — tiny, bare, sometimes accompanied by faint scratches along nearby trees. They never led away from the lake. Only toward it.
On quiet nights, the surface of the water would ripple, forming shapes that looked disturbingly like children playing, splashing in slow, fluid motions. And if you listened closely, you could hear whispers:
“Stay with us… the water remembers… the water is home…”
The lake slept. But it never forgot.
And it was always waiting.
The End
